Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Poem of the Day: Ted Berrigan's "Sonnet LI"

Sonnet LI

Summer so histrionic, marvelous dirty days
is not genuine           it shines forth from the faces
littered with soup, cigarette butts, the heavy
is a correspondent         the innocence of childhood
sadness graying the faces of virgins aching
and everything comes before their eyes
to be fucked, we fondle their snatches but they
that the angels have supereminent wisdom is shown
they weep and get solemn etcetera
from thought          for all things come to them gratuitously
by their speech        it flows directly and spontaneously
and O I am afraid! but later they’ll be eyeing the butts of the
      studs
in the street rain flushing the gutters bringing from Memphis
Gus Cannon gulping, “I called myself Banjo Joe!”


I chose Sonnet LI from Ted Berrigan’s book, The Sonnets. This poem was one of a series in which specific words from the poem are repeated throughout the series in different contexts. From the moment after I read it, I found the poem very captivating. Although the poem was as short as sonnets are, it presented real and concrete ideas in a beautiful manner. There is a lackadaisical and daydream-y tone to the poem, complimented by the carefree and mellow atmosphere that Berrigan implements. The poem starts by mentioning “marvelous dirty days,” which I interpreted as the idea that teenagers pass their time doing awful things but yet still have fond memories of those days.

Berrigan utilizes many literary tools in his writing that allow him to execute this so successfully. It initially caught my eye because I felt as though I could relate; the narrator seems to be speaking in the perspective of a teenager. The diction used helps establish this because it is very informal as presented by the lingo and inappropriate material discussed. For example, this is evident in “the innocence of childhood / sadness graying the faces of virgins aching / and everything comes before their eyes / to be fucked.” Also, the speaker appears to be addressing time passing and coming to terms with the fact that his or her carefree days are over.

Other effective literary tools are employed, such as alliteration like “dirty days” and “forth from the faces.” One of my favorite assets of the poem was Berrigan’s choice of verbs. Verbs such as “shines,” “littered,” “graying,” “fondle,” and “eyeing” are not typically used in the context that they are in this poem. These verbs appear to have been specifically selected in order to indicate a very specific meaning and fulfill a purpose. That in turn, makes it much more powerful, in my eyes. The verbs helped to convey abstract ideas with the complementation of other figurative tools such as personification. All in all, I really am fond of this poem. Berrigan is a master of his work and I found that his talents were palpable in this particular poem, as well as the series. I would highly recommend Berrigan’s The Sonnets.

—Nadia Khan

Nadia is a freshman planning to pursue a biology or biological anthropology major and a minor in creative writing. She hopes to seek a career in animal sciences and research. Along with her passion for animals and writing, she loves to spend time with friends, whom she considers her own personal diary when she doesn’t have a pen on hand.

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